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Topic: Need some insight from my boat buddies
Posted By: Kristof
Subject: Need some insight from my boat buddies
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 12:33pm
Okay friends, I need some help from you that are better at English than I.

Since some time now, my wife is planning on renewing her sandwich bar. A restart as it may.
So we already have a new concept and some good ideas on how we want to rebuild and fresh up the place.
I've been working on a new name and logo for it. I wanted something simple yet catchy and I came up with this:



"Tally" is the nickname her parents gave Chantal...
I just want to know if the sentence at the end is somewhat 'correct' English...

What do you guys think?
(BTW, Chantal loves it )



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Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 12:38pm
it's tally's SUBS but then her SANDWICHES become CLUBS

wtf is tally selling?

Tally's Subs is really all that is needed, nobody is going to care what the slogan is anyway (besides you and chatal maybe)


Posted By: quinner
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 12:47pm
How about :

"Where the Meat Always ends Up between the Buns"

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Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 12:51pm
Where ordinary buns become meat stuffed


Posted By: Kristof
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 12:54pm
Quinner... You never disappoint!!

And I'm pretty sure that in your mind is sounded like 'between her buns'

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Posted By: 63 Skier
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 1:18pm
I like it, good name and love the clear, easy to read logo. Slogan sentence is correct. Like Kevin said, as long as nobody objects to calling them subs in the store name and clubs in the slogan.

In case I ever make it to Belgium, is there a CCFan discount?

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Posted By: quinner
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 1:22pm
Where You Always get More Meat in Your Mouth

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Posted By: 63 Skier
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 1:25pm
Based on his suggestions, Quinner could be your next public spokesman, he would be the "Jared" of Tally's Subs,

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Posted By: relake
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 1:45pm
The English is correct, but like Hollywood says, it doesn't make much sense....Good luck!!

Tally's Subs, "Nobody beats our meat"

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Posted By: peter1234
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 8:46pm
is it a sub ? grinder ? hero? Hoagy? a club is 3 pieces of bread with bacon ,cheese , turkey ham roast beef of tuna for the filling.   The question you ask would be answered differently by members depending on their location in the states.. New england is a sub   formerly a grinder never a hoagy    only a hero if we are making fun of someone from away.

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Posted By: lewy2001
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 10:23pm
Do your subs come with beetroot


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Posted By: IAughtNaut
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 11:20pm
a tally can also be a tick mark or incremental numbering tool, so you could play on that, something like, where the sandwiches always get full marks. or, taste the high score. or, a delicious notch above the rest.

and for God's sake don't listen to Lewy, down with beetroot

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Posted By: MechGaT
Date Posted: August-09-2016 at 11:51pm
Why not "where ordinary sandwiches become deluxe!"?

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Posted By: Smithfamily
Date Posted: August-10-2016 at 7:01am
I have owned a wholesale meat company for 38 years. The guys that were successful made a great sandwich for a good value, "slogans" did not matter. Quality. Quantity and price. And believe it or not, "price" did not mean cheap, it meant fair value. Good Luck with it!

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Posted By: Morfoot
Date Posted: August-10-2016 at 7:58am
Originally posted by MechGaT MechGaT wrote:

Why not "where ordinary sandwiches become deluxe!"?


If you're gonna go with a slogan I like this one better than what you have IMHO.

Just like any Mom and Pop sandwhich shop the great service and how good the food is will sell the business. Most times that I have found, it's the little hole in the wall restaurants that have the best food in town.

Best of luck Chantal!





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Posted By: Kristof
Date Posted: August-10-2016 at 8:52am
Thanks for the input guys!

Well, the slogan was just me playing around (because in Belgium they will only know what subs are due to the fact that they heard that from the Subway shops here and people know the word 'club sandwich' from TV shows or movies)... We would just go for the logo.

And on the subject of quality and price. Chantal's shop exists for about 21 years now and she is renowned for her quality (and fair prcies for that matter). So that is covered

It's just that after so many years, we need to fresh up the whole concept a bit... Bring it to the USB 3.0 version



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Posted By: Bri892001
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 1:53am
The whole club sandwich thing reminds me of a classic Mitch Hedberg routine about sandwiches. You could say: "If you love a great sandwich, join our club"

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Posted By: GlassSeeker
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 3:40am
Tally's Super Subs....what makes a sandwich better than another? the quality of the meat and the bread or bun...those must be A#1 top quality do not skimp here. and it's a given that the vegs be fresh and of good quality..

Tally's puts the Super in your Sub!


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Posted By: tryathlete
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 10:31am
I'm never disappointed when I turn to CCF for my early morning coffee-through-the-nose laugh.


Posted By: SNobsessed
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 12:34pm
I would avoid 'ordinary' altogether.

'Where Sub meets Club'

Or better yet -

Extraordinary Subs meet Clubs

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Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 3:09pm
Subs meeting clubs makes no sense.

I heard Tally is kind of a ho...


Posted By: Orlando76
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 3:30pm
Originally posted by Hollywood Hollywood wrote:

Subs meeting clubs makes no sense.

I heard Tally is kind of a ho...


Yeah I wasn't catching that either.

Tally ho-ho-hoagie

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Posted By: quinner
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 4:10pm
Menu item #1 - Tally Whacker

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Posted By: 75 Tique
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 6:38pm
I left the whole subs vs clubs thing alone, thinking we don't necessarily know what that call what kind of sandwiches in Belgium, but if they are just using words they hear on American TV shows, maybe we need to clarify to Kristof what Hollywood is saying and why mixing subs and clubs doesn't make sense. Kristof, over here any way, a "sub" is a "submarine" sandwich. Long role. Also called grinder, hero. A "club" is typically a multi-layer sandwich (i.e top bread-bottom bread and typically a slice in the middle, of regular flat slices of bread, with meat and lettuce and tomatoes, spread out in the two layers. So pretty much different than a "sub". Hence, Hollywood's comments on we're not really turning subs into clubs.



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Posted By: DrCC
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 7:29pm
Whenever I hear Club, I first think of a wooden baseball bat like object.   And, what's a Gyro ?   Is a Gyro just another spelling of Hero ?
And, I like a good slogan, it helps correlate the product to the memory.

How bout:   Dive into Tally's Subs, (and then maybe something clever about Periscopes)
Or:   Why Tally's Subs? - Because Jimmy Johns is Freaky Fast and Subway is just plain Freaky.
Or:

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Posted By: SNobsessed
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 7:55pm
Sub & Club Wich Shoppe

Kristof, how about posting the menu?

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Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: August-17-2016 at 7:55pm
Does Tally serve any roast beef?


Posted By: Donald80SN
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 12:01am
Kristof,

You need to incorporate that you in the bath tub picture into the sign and say WHERE IS THE BEEF??????????

Now that is Marketing.

Donald

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Posted By: jbear
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 12:46am
Originally posted by Donald80SN Donald80SN wrote:

Kristof,

You need to incorporate that you in the bath tub picture into the sign and say WHERE IS THE BEEF??????????

Now that is Marketing.

Donald


between quinner & Donald....you never know what you're gonna get.



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Posted By: 8122pbrainard
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 1:10am
Originally posted by Donald80SN Donald80SN wrote:

Kristof,

You need to incorporate that you in the bath tub picture into the sign and say WHERE IS THE BEEF??????????

Now that is Marketing.

Donald



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Posted By: 75 Tique
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 1:15am
Pete, I believe a "hero" is a regional name for a submarine sandwich or sub. a gyro ("yee - ro"} is a Greek item. Flat bread, folded around lamb with lettuce and tomato and some kind of creamy sauce. A favorite of mine....when done right.

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Posted By: tryathlete
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 1:42am
Not to be a PITA but the flatbread on a Gyro is Pita Bread. I love a good Gyro too. There's a spot right in town where Quinner (and I) live that slices the Olympia Gyro Company Lamb meat "wheel of meat" after cooking in in the usual standard rotisserie and then to really make it great, they flash broil it in a hot oven to make the edges nice and crispy.

For more details on our favorite sandwich:
http://www.olympiagyros.com

Amazingly good considering like hot dogs, one simply does not want to know what goes into it.


Posted By: 63 Skier
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 10:52am
Originally posted by tryathlete tryathlete wrote:

Not to be a PITA but the flatbread on a Gyro is Pita Bread. I love a good Gyro too. There's a spot right in town where Quinner (and I) live that slices the Olympia Gyro Company Lamb meat "wheel of meat" after cooking in in the usual standard rotisserie and then to really make it great, they flash broil it in a hot oven to make the edges nice and crispy.

For more details on our favorite sandwich:
http://www.olympiagyros.com

Amazingly good considering like hot dogs, one simply does not want to know what goes into it.

I'd rather just grab a hot dog. Simpler. Less to go wrong.

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Posted By: IAughtNaut
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 12:42pm
The better question is how is it pronounced. I say Ji-row, with a long I like in kite because I know how to read. But I think you get extra D-bag points if you pronounce it Yee-row.

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Posted By: quinner
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 1:09pm
Dble Dbag points for Ji-row, lmao, that's as bad as guy-row
"year dough" is how the Greek's say it here in Chi Town Land,
Gyro:
Fresh Pita, Tomato and Onion slices, crumpled Feta Cheese and cucumber sauce. Meat is a lamb + beef heavily seasoned. Really good stuff!!

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Posted By: GlassSeeker
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 1:21pm
Where does the term Tally Hoe come from?

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Posted By: DrCC
Date Posted: August-18-2016 at 10:59pm
I could be wrong, but I think back in the Medieval days they would holler "Tally-ho-'ol chaps" as they were taking-off in their Yeerocopters.

But anyway, I've got it !
Collect 10,000 Tally's Sub tickets and Receive A Free Boat Ride.


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Posted By: Kristof
Date Posted: August-19-2016 at 7:03pm
Originally posted by jbear jbear wrote:

between quinner & Donald....you never know what you're gonna get.

Yeah John, I figured that much...

And the main kind of sandwiches Chantal sells are the submarine kind.
So, it will be just the logo whitout any slogan.

Thanks for the help, funny comments guys. And whatever you said Quinner and Donald



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Posted By: Kristof
Date Posted: August-19-2016 at 7:12pm
Originally posted by GlassSeeker GlassSeeker wrote:

Where does the term Tally Hoe come from?


"Tally ho" actually comes from 17th century France ('taïaut') where it was shouted to round up the dogs to hunt deer.

In WWII, British pilots used it to radio that they spotted enemy aircrafts. It was also the motto of the famous WWII BRAF 609 squadron.

Nowadays it is also used in England during fox hunting.





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Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: August-19-2016 at 7:47pm
POIDH lets see these sandwiches already


Posted By: quinner
Date Posted: August-19-2016 at 11:07pm
Hollywood needs a knuckle sandwich

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